Pitch Evaluation - Connor

Our pitch managed to flow very well and we all knew what it was that we were talking about. We had a clear plan of who was saying what, which resulted in us having a clear presentation. We considered every aspect of what was going to be used in the film, and managed to convey our ideas in a strong way throughout.

We were then told in feedback that our pitch was structured very well and clearly, and that our parts on the mise-en-scene, risk assessment, and sound aspects were extremely well thought out. We were then given a few minor things to work on. The targets that we were given to work on consisted of establishing permissions for where we would film for our shopping centre scenes, and also add a bit more to the storyboard. We then worked on these aspects to polish out the entire presentation.

Overall, I feel that our group carried out the presentation very well, and that it was clear what we were trying to convey.